Little embarrassing... any opinions?

[moosassah]

Save the poem for when you are dating & then you can tell her that you wrote it way back, but weren't sure about giving it to her...then she'll really love it. I hope you have a great time at the dance...with her as your date.

 

[Nastynotch]

I'd suggest maybe asking her on a casual date before the dance. always a strong start.
the poems a strong hit for a start. though its a nice thought and very well done.
maybe flirt a tad bit.
flicker your eyes

and ask her whos shes going with. If a name doesnt show up, ask her.

 

[BluGnat]

The poem is adorable, and you are really cool to have come up with it. Agreed with everyone re: timing, but that's why you asked, right? BEST of luck with the dance, and I'm crossing my fingers for you that you guys're together down the road and you show her the poem with the (geckoforums) story behind it and she gets all doe-y eyed and give you a gigantic hug and the rest is history...